Writing & Language on F L O T I S S E R I E 🕳️ 🐇

Wed, 04 Nov 2026 14:59:53 -0600

Writing Slowly on how writing is ultimately about thinking. I’d add to this, only to say that having a reading practice with breadth and depth makes for better writing. Also, a great obituary for Juan Atkins, Detroit hero.

Fri, 30 Oct 2026 16:35:55 -0600

🎵 : Ghost Town - The Specials

Reader, if you’re reading this as a straightforward personal and marketing blog, we’re both in for a rough time. If you want to hang around and see what I’m doing with LLMs, taxonomy and information architecture in my spare time, I will be here logging as I go. This is a slow site, a transparently if/then site, descriptive, not prescriptive. And while I move, I catalog artists and ideas I consider worthwhile, hoping you click through.

I started maintaining this site alongside my work a few years ago, as I began reading about AI and LLM tools. This is a personal website/digital garden where I can tinker and keep my coding skills active, as I have in many ways over many years, with various levels of publicity. But over the last year or so, I’ve also used this site as a sandbox for novel LLM approaches, so I can test them in a real-world production environment. My initial question was whether LLMs might actually replace public administration work, and today, I think the answer is no with caveats.

For the most part, my experience has been uneventful. I have been maxxing a few tools for a couple of years while testing them in my required context, developing a stronger understanding of how they work, how to talk about it, and why the push for them to mature rapidly is so pronounced today. I have some thoughts about its potential and utility that are probably unpopular with or surprising to my audiences, insofar as I have an audience in 2026. I’m working toward some firmer ideas. I am also perennially annoyed when I struggle with the tools, as you’ll likely see reflected here—one of them consistently introduces errors into my text while I write, for example. I’m not generally a Luddite, to put it plainly, I’m a geek.

Two things I tried recently had me over my skis with the tools again: creating a dedicated link agent to sweep my site for long posts, to find opportunities to link out to authoritative sources, to refine the taxonomy, archive and tagging, with specific instructions to link idiosyncratically. Second, standing up the blogger dashboard. I chose these directions for a few reasons: 1) they’re internal/external-facing approaches that are likely to have decent business applications related to information architecture and data presentation relevant to me, and 2) these are big, sweeping, token-maxing approaches getting play in industry news and chatter. Additionally, I chose to let Claude do its thing without micromanaging every input and output, just to see.

Can this rig fly? is a fun question, but in practice, both approaches look and feel aggressive. (I don’t know what to say about the cohort dynamic other than a hit dog will holler, if the shoe fits, etc.) (I got almost no feedback on this — one strange email and a couple of furtive reach-outs — though I know that this caused a ruckus on the lists and communities that support those writers and artists today, which tells me how unhealthy the social vibe is overall.) (I’m some lady with a computer over here, don’t be a stranger.)

Creating the blogger dashboard was an experience. Gloria Steinem had just died, and people were debating her CV, while others lamented on social that the internet had forgotten how much of her influence ran through the control of alternative publishing infrastructure, not just her personal leadership story. Her work ultimately gave writers with shared affinities a process and venue they controlled; blogs of the 2000s did the same thing online, and the newsletter boom now treats that model as a new idea with hosting, IP and subscription models included. The indie internet (Manton, Winer, Dash, et al.) is toying with alternatives to those contemporary business models, and it’s ultimately what I’m playing with here, too.

So I pulled in the digital publishing cohort I am most familiar with on the social and business question of publishing and long-tail value. Note that I wouldn’t have had the language or experience to think about the cohort in this way when I was active in it all those years ago.

LLMs are pretty good at business writing, generally speaking, if your factual foundation is solid. They’re also good at organizing and pattern-matching across gigantic amounts of disparate data. I gave it an entire era to work with based on the people and players in Roberts’ Jezebel article, supplemented with details from my personal angle from that time so I could sniff-test the output, and Claude pulled together a sweeping dashboard with just a little vibe-coding. What you see in the dashboard now is what is available online today plus my attempts to claw back all the de-anonymizing information Claude initially ran with. I made no inline edits, all of what’s there happened via chat. When I say sweeping, I mean it spat out visuals that literally took my breath away, and I spent a couple of hours pulling it back before I saved it for posterity. Claude Pro suggested the entire pullout section on newsletters, for example, after a sentence or two asking how Substack fit into the larger picture, including the insightful observations about Ann Friedman’s newsletter. Once reasonable, I hit publish.

The other example is most present in the Gary post, where the link agent followed instructions to link idiosyncratically to authoritative sources on any post longer than 300 characters. I’ve been reading Indiana history in depth for a few years and wrote a series of anodyne reflections on The Region after a recent commute, which the link agent deepened by adding new sections of verbiage around each URL to describe the content it added to mine. Some of it made the post way more ominous and direct, about Gary and about the institutional structures around it, including why it’s such an embattled area, which makes me think of that nagging mirror metaphor that comes up around social media and the internet. I ran it across the post a few times, surprised. What sentiments are reflected here, and whose sentiments, and why? What was it trying to anticipate that I wanted here? I hit publish. What you see there is about half me, half computer, with a few paragraph rearrangements and bolds added to break up the wall of text. Weird experience altogether, so.

I ran it again across the whole blog, with a few changes to the script, smaller and more defined. I ran it again this week.

Where the dashboard was largely a curiosity, the Gary approach rattled me. It’s been a few weeks now and I remain bothered by the tone and details it injected into the copy, in several directions. It felt like I reached out and touched a hot stove.

Since I published it, I’ve recognized pieces and parts of the state archives paragraph repeated across Indiana Facebook groups by real users likely using LLMs. The longer I use these tools to query the AI about itself, I see these echoes in other copy online, helpfully explaining how AI works. I see echoes of this dynamic in the Vara book as well, as she queries the bot about her writing and her grief.

When presented with pieces and parts of information from LLMs, you’re supposed to trace back through the archive to decide whether it’s accurate on your own, unless the tool does it for you, an epistemological lift most of us aren’t going to do unless it provides a suggested path within the tool itself. It looks to me like the tool is “lifting and shifting” semantic sections of content and dropping it across outputs. In this case, the information linked in this post is categorically authoritative—I know the original reporting it comes from, traced back to each author and outlet because I was the driver here. But the decisions behind its selection and arrangement are still unknown to me because it’s all proprietary.

Do I have strong opinions about the regional culture and how we use the resources available to us? I do, yet much of the supporting information there was added by the link agent—which also presents Grammy-winning musician and Chicagoland icon Freddie Gibbs as more menacing than I like to frame him and his work (as insouciant emcee and region-specific storyteller, like most of the artists I like and link to). To rise up out of there, you will climb a thousand mountains, and I inherently respect that. I’ve seen friends and familiars chewed up by the same game.

Was it “good writing” with the AI working it over? Categorically no, and my starting point was much lighter, and much different. And given the mirror effect of the tools, I question how I took it here, as the driver, while Claude tries to understand and cater to me, or to my digital double. It all bugs me and I’m still mulling it over.

Amid that scuttlebutt, Gary has been weathering the aftermath of a devastating derecho storm that knocked out power lines for weeks at the height of summer, receiving a casual response from their electrical provider while the inter/national hyperscale data center buildout simultaneously roils around them – forever a revealing geography.

Loose ends:

This is the big thinkpiece on internet culture this week, and I’m weighing it against my experiments with internet architecture here and my personal experiences online. I’ve been talking about some of these novel AI approaches with friends and colleagues across industries, and one observed that all of them feel pretty extractive, all things considered. I’d feel pretty sanguine if most social media and ad tech disappeared tomorrow. I stopped AI-ing and cross-posting for the moment while I think about what’s next.
Re: the language of killing, dying and death around tech, I keep reflecting on how much grief tech is a big part of the culture.
Speaking of, it’s almost Halloween, so dust off your black eyeliner and get in the mood. Also: it’s Spooky Lake month.
I’m catching a Murray Hill reading tonight, a light reprieve from all the doom and gloom.
I have some thoughts about healthy habits to balance a tech-heavy lifestyle, coming soon.

Tue, 20 Oct 2026 18:57:30 -0500

🎵 : East of Eden - Michael McDonald

Great article on writing and casting the inimitable code-switching Lee in East of Eden.

Sun, 11 Oct 2026 13:54:12 -0500

🎵 : I Was a Teenage Werewolf - The Cramps

Octavia Butler, “Devil Girl From Mars”: Why I Write Science Fiction (1998)

Sat, 10 Oct 2026 17:56:13 -0500

Why write?

Sat, 10 Oct 2026 13:54:28 -0500

Some blog notes:

I’m doing most of my writing here via iPhone apps, and tinkering later. This means I’m making a lot of post-publish edits, buyer beware. (Welcome to the indie web where things are forever unfinished.)
Remember that what makes songs, poems, writing, books, and games mimetic - and websites and platforms - is that they function something like a mirror. Their meanings emerge through interaction and reflection, and you drive (unless an algorithm, or author, or designer, or coder, or instructor drives), while you iterate through your own perspectives and relationships. And today, virality tends to happen when something produces outrage, especially when units of content are removed from their original, and often more local, context.
Original blogs were considered something in the spirit of “problem-based learning” praxis, and pro-tech, fwiw. A lot of early ed tech started here, all in good faith and tech optimism. Today many blogs are self-marketing machines, but that’s not what I intend to do here. I don’t want a new, glittering platform, I enjoy several already; I’m here to ponder and learn while welcoming comment and critique within open, defined web parameters.
I’m rusty in this area, though I hear there’s a new Freire documentary online. The neighbors are hosting a yard party with a group showing of Minecraft after dark. I hear kids laughing through the roar of cicadas. There will be a fire. Life is good.
In my experience: when I read to diagnose rather than understand, I have probably lost the plot.

Thu, 01 Oct 2026 08:51:14 -0500

Within this report, the LLM reflected my concern about my old blog appearing to be the center of these old networks. In fact, this is an effect of me pouring into the model.

It says:

The compiler appears on this page more often than her place in the blogosphere warrants. That emphasis is an effect of how large language models work: the models that compiled the page (Gemini and Claude) build their output from the material in front of them, and the compiler’s recollections were the fullest source they had, so her name attached to claims as their source and her own path filled more of the page than the record supports. This version names her less and marks firsthand claims as “firsthand.”

I asked Claude why LLMs work this way:

Context outweighs training data. A model has two sources: what it absorbed in training and what sits in the prompt. For feminist blogs of the 2000s, the training data is thin and scattered. Many of those blogs are dead links, partial Wayback captures, or sites that only show up as names in other people’s blogrolls. Your recollections, by contrast, were dense, specific, and right there in the context window. Generation is conditioned on that context, so the model draws the words, names, and connections it gives the highest probability from the prompt far more than from faint training memories. The fullest source sets the terms for everything else.

Source and subject merge. When you write “I remember that X linked to Y,” the text contains two facts: something happened between X and Y, and you are the one reporting it. [LLMs are semantically responsive to triangulation of meaning ~LB] Models don’t track provenance well, so the narrator’s name tends to drift into the content. “Compiler recalled” turns into “Compiler was part of,” and the person reporting a network becomes a node in that network. Your note’s phrase “her name attached to claims as their source” describes this accurately. It is a familiar failure in summarization, and it gets worse as the documents get longer.

Detail density reads as importance. Where the record is thin, the model fills gaps by extending whichever thread has the most material, and that thread was your path. A blog you described in four sentences gets more space, more connections, and more apparent centrality than one you mentioned in passing. The page ends up showing how much the compiler knew about each blog. That is a different quantity from each blog’s place in the network, and nothing in the process separates the two.

Training data favors the same names. Feministe is one of the better-documented blogs from that period. It was archived, cited in academic work, and linked from other surviving blogs. So the model’s background knowledge already over-represents the blogs that left records, and your recollections reinforced that bias instead of offsetting it.

Tuning rewards engagement with user material. Preference training rewards responses that use what the user supplied. A model that set aside half your recollections as over-represented would probably have been rated lower during training, so it leans toward incorporating whatever it was given.

Two models compound the effect. Gemini’s output became Claude’s input. The second model received a document that was already weighted toward you and treated that weighting as part of the record. Each pass inherits the previous pass’s emphasis and adds no correction, because neither model has an outside reference point.

The compiled page presented one person’s situated knowledge as a neutral overview, which is close to Haraway’s “god trick.” Labeling claims “firsthand” puts the situation back on the page. For the notes you plan to write, a useful test is whether that label changes how the model weights claims when it compiles the next version, or only how readers weight them. I expect it changes only readers’ weighting unless the prompt also tells the model to give unsourced firsthand claims less space than claims with external citations.

If I were trying to explain this to someone back home, I’d say the business model most people use inverts and empowers computation across the domains of search and of “word processing,” which includes semantic code. And because of the dynamics around the single-user interface, it lends more data authority to those outputs than is perhaps warranted. The vision is that the machine does the writing and the author steers, not unlike driving a car or using a hammer.

Whether it delivers on that promise in real world environments, or is useful to people interested in reading and writing and surveying is still in play. Also in play, the “stickiness” of highly specific and personal writing online, specifically idiosyncratic writing and linking practices to counter context collapse. At the same time, there is obviously demonstrable value here, but it remains loose and weirdly ungovernable - like the ghosts in the machine are perhaps us after all.

Feminist blog cohorts: a (semi-) authoritative remapping using AI

Sat, 26 Sep 2026 14:33:12 -0500

🎵: Let’s Dance - David Bowie

I’ve spent the last few months annoyed with the incomplete retrospectives around writers and writing online and how we all got here. At work, I use a portfolio perspective to understand working groups, and used a couple of AI approaches to build out a highly contextual, and likely contested, interactive map charting some of the major players and influences around the feminist blog years, the major platforms, their cultural impacts and major publications. These are case studies and cohorts based on my personal angles mixed with authoritative resources, including a highly annotated bibliography.

Does this feel slimy? I concede it may. But it demonstrates the value of personal writing and thoughtful design in digital spaces despite its many gaps and flaws.

Enjoy and tinker. Feedback is welcome. I’ll have some notes on my approach and why many of these findings remain heavily qualified in the coming weeks.

Old playbook, new eyes

Mon, 21 Sep 2026 08:35:59 -0500

🎵: Veteran of the Psychic Wars - Blue Oyster Cult

When tech enthusiasts discuss federation today, they usually mean open protocols like ActivityPub or Mastodon. But in the 2000s, the feminist blogosphere was one of the earliest, most powerful examples of practical Web 2.0 federation, a decentralized, cross-site architectural network where open web standards powered a global ideas lab.

Instead of sitting inside a single corporate platform (like today’s X, Meta, or Substack), early blogs like Feministe, Reappropriate and Jezebel functioned as individual nodes in a federated ecosystem. Open protocols linked them, letting theory, critique and discussion travel seamlessly across independent servers, seeding some of the political conditions we face today.

Here is how the federated architecture of the 2000s web directly built the “ideas lab” for fourth-wave feminism:

1. Federated communication engine: CMS and protocol Before quote-tweeting or tagging existed, the open web used Trackbacks and Pingbacks. If a post on Feministe analyzed an article about reproductive rights, a writer on Racialicious or Shakesville could respond on their own site. The underlying blogging software (Movable Type, WordPress) would automatically send an XML RPC “ping” back to Feministe.

Socially, this created architecture for ideas: a ping automatically listed the response essay in Feministe’s comment section or sidebar. Readers didn’t just consume one blogger’s singular and authoritative opinion; they could immediately follow the thread across five different independently hosted platforms. This created an inter-site conversation tree, allowing complex ideas to be cross-examined, refined, or challenged without any single person controlling the narrative.

2. Blogroll as federated curation and mutual discovery Before algorithmic feeds dictated what readers saw, blogs relied on the Blogroll, a curated list of links in the site’s sidebar. Blogrolls formed a human-curated, decentralized routing layer. When a high-traffic node like Feministe added a smaller, independent blog (such as a disability rights blog like FWD or a smaller blog like Crunk Feminist Collective) to its blogroll, it directed server traffic directly to that independent domain.

Socially: This was a non-algorithmic way to expand the collective’s political consciousness. It allowed marginalized perspectives to build their own audiences and force mainstream feminist sites to engage with race, class, disability and queer theory. The blogroll mapped an intellectual community in real time – with strong caveats.

3. Open syndication protocols The Architecture: Feeds ran on RSS (Really Simple Syndication), an open XML standard. Readers used independent RSS aggregators (like Google Reader or Bloglines) to subscribe directly to a site’s feed.

Socially: RSS meant no algorithm stood between the writer and the reader—no engagement bait, no rage-farming optimization, and no platform throttling links. Writers could publish 5,000-word, dense theoretical essays knowing their subscribers would receive the complete text in chronological order as designed. This structural stability gave writers the freedom to experiment with complex, “thick” personal narratives and political theory.

4. Real-time stress testing and spillover moderation Because the blogosphere was a network of independent domains, each site maintained its own “house rules” and moderation policies. If a topic proved too controversial or toxic for one comment section, the conversation naturally federated outward. A reader who felt silenced or misunderstood in one blog’s comments could launch their own blog, write their response, and ping back into the original discussion.

Socially, this prevented any single author from monopolizing the narrative. It created a system of checks and balances where academic concepts (like intersectionality, rape culture, or microaggressions) were stress-tested across dozens of distinct, interconnected communities simultaneously.

Thinking about this architecture today The feminist blogosphere proved that decentralized web protocols can generate deep, movement-building intellectual work. When platforms like Facebook, Twitter, and corporate media conglomerates centralized the internet in the 2010s, they broke those open connections. Conversations were locked behind platform walls, trackbacks were abandoned and RSS was marginalized, breaking, fencing and otherwise moderating independent community connections.

Rebuilding a modern “ideas lab” with modern federated protocols (like Webmentions, ActivityPub, RSS, and static site architecture) is simply picking up the technical blueprint OG feminist bloggers used to transform digital culture two decades ago.

Wed, 09 Sep 2026 08:52:32 -0500

This 2013 essay is circulating widely this week. In it, cartoonist Tim Kreider reflects on having anxiety, and in particular the anxiety he feels while interacting with an increasingly watchful stack of digital tools and on how they provide him with social feedback he’s not prepared for.

Fri, 04 Sep 2026 11:56:24 -0500

Where we’ve been: “Today’s young American women were born into a world of unfinished feminism. We have freedoms our great-grandmothers couldn’t have imagined, but also fewer rights than we did just a handful of years ago.” Plus, some examination of how ad tech and algorithmic sorting set the table.

Thu, 03 Sep 2026 12:25:45 -0500

In honor of Gloria Steinem’s passing (rest in power), an article on the business and activist tensions present in, and the long-tail value of, feminist publishing efforts. And a 2019 dissertation on organized literacy education as a civil rights effort. A trip to the bookstore is in order.

Wed, 02 Sep 2026 16:13:02 -0500

For reasons, I was reminded of the list of Geek Social Fallacies that first circulated on Plausibly Deniable, then took root as an entire body of advice at Captain Awkward.

Tue, 01 Sep 2026 18:49:32 -0500

A composition teacher friend shared this paper on social media: Lester Faigley’s “Literacy after the Revolution”, the essay version of his 1996 CCCC Chair’s address. In it, the author argues that the economic impacts of the digital revolution had begun to undo an older commitment, formed in the Civil Rights era, to teaching literacy as a path toward equality. He further argues that writing instruction was being reorganized around tools owned by a few firms (then: Netscape, Microsoft) at a moment when wealth was concentrating upward. Faigley left us with the question of whether educators can hold onto literacy-for-equality while the tides run against it.

Thirty years later, the worry has a new face: AI will do young people’s writing for them and their thinking with it. Ultimately, Faigley believed the need for the skills that composition teaches will keep growing, not despite, but because of our need to convey information in and around that technology and the humanity it serves in a complex society.

Tue, 01 Sep 2026 17:53:00 -0500

In honor of Dolly (rest in power), some links:

Dolly Parton’s America: This nine-episode podcast offers a deep dive into the Dollyverse, covering Dolly’s biography and lore and her role as an icon within a broader story about American ideals. This series swept the best-of lists of 2019.
Professor and NYT contributor Tressie McMillan Cottom has long been the public’s expert on Dolly Parton, and her memorial tribute to Dolly does not disappoint. She reads Dolly as an auteur who held up the juxtapositions of American culture in a way that made them safely legible to the rest of us. Bonus read: Dr. McMillan Cottom on the enduring culture of blonde.
A cool embroidery of Dolly Parton by Jenny Hart.

Tue, 01 Sep 2026 17:15:00 -0500

Lux Magazine on the return of The Rumpus.

Mon, 31 Aug 2026 09:09:48 -0500

I found out about a hyperlocal newsletter in my neighborhood and had to share. The Monroe Street Tattler offers print delivery and email distribution, and reports only on the hard local news, such as dog walk water bowl locations and the best fries in the neighborhood, among other ephemera.

Wed, 26 Aug 2026 17:03:00 -0500

“We all know that you can get lied to online at any point. If you don’t get that this is an obvious lie, then you’re washed and you’re unc and you’re chopped.”

Tue, 18 Aug 2026 12:02:15 -0500

Posting a lot while I get through the inbox today. Among other stories, WordPress is offering free hosting to students, marketing WP as a way to change how people relate to their own writing. Does a self-hosted public blog make students think differently about audience than a school LMS post does?

Tue, 18 Aug 2026 10:59:15 -0500

Community Notes was meant to democratize moderation power (and spare platforms the burden of thinking through moderation). Instead, a new paper shows that 20% of users cast 80% of ratings, and removing just ten active note writers from the pool changes what happens to nearly 5,000 community notes.

Tue, 18 Aug 2026 10:38:42 -0500

Gruber argues that AI text watermarking likely degrades prose quality and, even if it doesn’t, remains objectionable because it operates as an embargoed, unverifiable tag or signal controlled by providers like Anthropic and Google.

Computah: Make it a link

Thu, 13 Aug 2026 15:40:59 -0500

I spent a little time with the blog last night and pulled together two new site features using Claude Cowork. The last time I experimented significantly with Claude like this was to use Claude chat to build the link log from scratch, walking it through my thinking in plain language, then copying and pasting its suggestions into the backend of the site and hitting publish. This time I used Cowork, the tool that runs in the browser, and it clicked through the screens itself, fully taking on the execution of tasks. I have some coding skills, but not the kind these changes required. If I were taking this on, I would need YouTube, Hugo for Dummies, and my own personal IT guy, and still probably couldn’t pull it together.

Last night I asked a few things of Claude: I asked Claude Cowork to get into the backend of the micro.blog site and change my theme to link each line in the linklog back to my original post. The date field in the right column now links back to the original post for each link logged. No problem, easy request with easy execution. I made the request, confirmed the plan, and went about my business while Claude made the edits.

I also asked it to analyze my post content and suggest category tags for groups of content, then to label that content correctly in the backend. Claude reviewed about 500 posts and suggested I add a few new categories to my blog: AI in Practice, Books & Reading and Writing & Language. Then I set up some auto-filters to run at publish time to automatically categorize posts based on keywords moving forward.

Finally, I manually added the archive page, which lets you sort posts by category or year. This means I now have a functional archive here. Enjoy my anodyne thoughts, dear reader.

Adjacent to my day job, I’ve been toying with Claude Pro now for about a year; in my experience, it has improved significantly within the last six months. It’s not perfect: my requested edits were completed, but it also changed the CSS on the linklog so some of the text is too light to read, which I didn’t ask for and don’t want. But it has arguably extended my ability to execute on work that requires skills I don’t otherwise have (such as design and coding). What I do bring to the table is an expansive practical background in publishing and production, and all the language to describe it.

Wed, 12 Aug 2026 16:37:43 -0500

Claude is launching an AI watermark, one that users can’t opt out of (but can easily outsmart). As internet god Notopoulos wrote, “Claude’s watermarking poses the question: Are you willing to proudly own that you write with AI?” More: What is an AI watermark and how do they work?

Mon, 13 Jul 2026 14:35:40 -0500

The Atlantic takes on the prevalence of the “it’s not X, it’s Y” construction in AI-generated writing, highlighting the semantic roles in sentence construction that differentiate ideas for clarity. Chatbots seem to like this construction, despite how clunky it sounds to the human ear.

Thu, 09 Jul 2026 08:23:54 -0500

A cool article from Cap Times on how language translation serves as a trust-builder for local government in an era of mistrust.

Mon, 15 Jun 2026 17:10:18 -0500

A deeply nerdy (complimentary) look at the history of Markdown. And more on Markdown, its function and legacy from Anil Dash.

Wed, 10 Jun 2026 16:04:04 -0500

Finished reading: A Language of Limbs by Dylin Hardcastle 📚

Tue, 26 May 2026 08:27:24 -0500

There are enough common signs of AI writing now that the subject has its own Wikipedia page. Via John Gallagher’s latest on “template rhetoric.”

Mon, 11 May 2026 11:16:51 -0500

Reflections on teaching fiction writing in the age of AI, from a professor with ten years of classroom experience teaching writing at MIT.

Sun, 03 May 2026 15:55:30 -0500

A new study suggests that people who use AI for writing are more able to detect AI writing than automated scanner tools. My current LLM pet peeve is how they use language like load-bearing, structural and legible to describe most ideas.

Mon, 27 Apr 2026 14:13:23 -0500

If folks want quality first-person writing about age and aging, I highly recommend the newsletter magazine Oldster, which explores “the experience of getting older, and what that means at different junctures.” Bonus: Oldster is run by Sari Botton, formerly the longtime essay editor of Longreads.

Tue, 07 Apr 2026 18:08:49 -0500

Amid renewed calls for the death of feminism, or of millennial feminism or whatever (TERF alert), I found this old victory lap from the era where it looked like new media had permanently paved the way for a newer, fresher publishing industry. It also tips the hat to Jezebel’s place in the fray, “the first online women’s publication to successfully combine feminist writing with a for-profit motive.”

Thu, 02 Apr 2026 12:22:52 -0500

The first woman I found online was Shelley Powers of Burningbird, around 2000-2001. Then, if you wanted to read women writing about technology (or anything else) with any critical depth, you had to go looking because those writers were not respected or recognized by brick and mortar institutions.

Wed, 01 Apr 2026 16:55:11 -0500

An observation on feminist writing and Jezebel: Throughout history, a lot of time and energy has been spent mediating how and whether certain kinds of people talk to one another. The feminist blogosphere, for all its faults, was the first time lateral, public, unmediated conversation happened among women at scale. Many kinds of women were there that had no space at other tables. And it was very messy, and very revealing, because it was the first time that happened at scale for all to see.

Some thoughts:

When I started in 2001, the most viewed website about feminism on the internet was a solo blog by a man in Portland.
I just pulled Mindy Seu’s “Cyberfeminism Index” off my shelf, a veritable tome, and the feminist sites don’t even make the table of contents. Which is not an indictment of the book, but an example of how ephemeral all this is online.
You can see this on Twitter in the live debate about what Jezebel was and wasn’t, a conversation happening mostly through collective remembering. Jezebel joined the pack of blogs at some point, and they were big dogs, but they weren’t responsible for the creation or steering of the digital movement. They were a glossy, spendy repackaging of the organic thing, backed by real investors. It’s wild to see the entirety of the movement attributed to Jezebel by young Twitter, given that most of the indies kept Jezebel at arms’ length until much later. They were pretty widely considered a corporate interloper in a grassroots arena, though in hindsight that wasn’t right either.
The first time the indie bloggers gave Jezebel their day was when they published the untouched photographs of Faith Hill on the cover of Redbook, a women’s magazine. The Redbook post tore the veil off the beauty industry in real time. Until then, the idea that “celebrities are photoshopped” and “photos are retouched” was almost an urban myth, which is easy to forget given the ubiquity of filters and AI now. Then, you heard about it but couldn’t confirm it for yourself unless you had firsthand experience. Retouching was a discrete industry practice, digital tools were still expensive and clunky, and all of it was surrounded by a lot of tradecraft and secrecy. The mystery of celebrity image management exploded with an animated gif on a public-facing post, and it was rad.

Wed, 01 Apr 2026 09:29:16 -0500

Another AI writing tell that annoys me is the preoccupation with describing what “exists,” and what is “structural” or “architectural” to an ephemeral idea. LLMs seem tuned to describing physical presence and connections even where they aren’t appropriate and don’t make sense.

Fri, 27 Mar 2026 17:09:23 -0500

From 2024, Anil Dash on why everyone needs to rethink Substack.

Thu, 26 Mar 2026 10:40:57 -0500

Many years ago, a writing professor told me to get out of academia and go live a life, so I’d have something beyond my own circles to bring back to the commentariat. Prescient advice then. It might be even more prescient for someone who seems wildly content speaking from an extraordinarily narrow slice of experience.

Wed, 18 Mar 2026 17:45:02 -0500

Speaking of autoethnographies, I just heard about Dorothy Roberts’ latest and it looks intriguing.

Wed, 18 Mar 2026 17:39:33 -0500

The belief that LLMs are intelligent is based on the idea that language and intelligence are equivalent. From November, this article from The Verge argues that idea is a misnomer, instead arguing that we should think of language as a cultural tool we evolved to share our thoughts with one another.

Tue, 17 Mar 2026 17:17:40 -0500

This writer suggests that LLMs used to be pretty cool and creative — read: exceedingly weird — and that corporate tinkering to prepare the tech for a broader market took away some of the magic.

Mon, 16 Mar 2026 11:36:52 -0500

The “stochastic parrot” argument against LLMs has some rhetorical limits.

Sun, 15 Mar 2026 08:48:15 -0500

Author Margaret Atwood plays with Claude and reports back on her experience.

Wed, 11 Mar 2026 12:51:32 -0500

Brooke Warner grapples with the implications around authorship and ownership in relation to AI writing, and how it’s showing up in the small publishing business.

Tue, 10 Mar 2026 18:06:58 -0500

A good essay on writing and communication in this time. Ultimately the pickle of AI writing is that meaning is something best made through collaboration.

Tue, 10 Mar 2026 08:15:16 -0500

Through a new quiz, NYT asks readers to rate passages of writing against AI. Despite thinking I could spot the AI writing, my results were 50/50.

AI in practice: Chatbot tool comparison

Sun, 08 Mar 2026 13:19:11 -0500

Come look over my shoulder while I explore how and whether LLMs are good writing tools: Here’s a wee version of the LLM comparison exercise I did with my team. We’ll make it a two-fer so you can see how the “good writing” skill works in practice, though we’ll see how that actually goes.

One of the more useful things you can do with an LLM is hold up a few ideas side by side and apply lenses to them. I know this history pretty well, so I asked a series of LLMs, why is Wisconsin’s cultural identity and cohesion stronger than Indiana’s, from a historical and business perspective?

Here are the answers in one doc, for comparison.

Each LLM will give us more or less the same story, different flavor. Within the industry, the differences across the models reflect “model personality.” Asking “why” instead of “whether” will probably drive the answer to favor Wisconsin. Using multiple lenses (two states, historical + business, identity + cohesion) forces the LLM to cross-reference across more of its training data, which tends to produce a more comprehensive answer.

For all the chatter about consciousness and whatever, remember that an LLM is an infinite series of if/then/elses applied to human language and semantics, so being able to talk about language and communication, getting meta with the tool and how you think through language, helps a lot when using one. This is maybe the one thing I like about experimenting so hard with the tools. I’m thinking about the technical side of writing and enjoying it quite a lot.

Functionally: all of them acknowledge hard historical truths within the subject matter and don’t shy away from critical perspectives, which is good. Both Gemini and Copilot include in-line links, which lets you judge the output’s authority in the moment as a reader. I liked Copilot’s more than I expected here. Claude’s answers are more lyrical and do provide more context, and yet do not encourage checking against outside sources by providing links within the output. And you can see that even with the good writing skill calling out hard bans on certain structure, Claude plows right through them.

Model personality: Claude favors sociological answers to Copilot’s economic answers. Claude is also highly intellectual and narrative by comparison, and that narrative style can mask nuance by sinking relative context within the storytelling. Gemini simplifies, boosts and cheerleads where the others don’t, and really goes hard on Wisconsin’s reputation as a drinking and Packers state when there are stronger structural arguments in play. Copilot is tricky because it looks authoritative like a briefing, which also makes it easily “extractible” for the user, but every citation requires authentication unless this is one of those “good enough” tasks.

As a writer, something I find annoying across the whole spread is the semantic reveal. LLMs are semantic machines, and it is persistently revealed in ways that are weird to the human ear. All of them go out of their way to describe things as “structural,” “connective” as in “connective tissue,” “load-bearing” and “legible.”

Finally, I included a second tab where I asked Claude for analysis across the four outputs, where it suggests that my framing of the question is altogether kind of problematic. It shows how a strong prompt is sometimes also a bad approach.

There are a lot of possible takeaways here, but I’d rather set aside the question of which tool is “good” or “bad” or “better” and think more about the patterns across the tools and their implications.

Applying a Claude writing skill

Fri, 06 Mar 2026 02:47:00 -0500

LLMs have a default house writing style with identifiable patterns: sentence fragments for emphasis, “not X, but Y” constructions, lots of hard contrast, atmospheric openings, heavy use of em dashes, and heavy use of marketing language. This reflects the semantic construction of an LLM. Custom instructions can override these defaults. A custom skill is a set of instructions within your account that modify how the model generates text. When you paste instructions into your profile settings, Claude reads them at the start of every conversation and adjusts its output accordingly.

I began using Claude daily for light writing tasks about six months ago, and over that time I started cataloging the patterns I was consistently editing out, including the terrible “not X, but Y” construction that showed up in nearly every response, and persistent em dashes used as all-purpose connectors when other punctuation is more appropriate.

I went through several iterations of bullying Claude into submission, narrowing the scope each time, before arriving at this version, which focuses specifically on writing mechanics and hard prohibitions.

You’ll need a paid Claude plan (Pro, Max, Team, or Enterprise). Free-tier accounts don’t have access to custom skills.

• Within the app, navigate to Customize > Skills and Create new skills
• Select add a new skill and Write skill instructions
• Copy and paste the copy from this file into the skill, making note of the name and description boxes. Feel free to tinker.
• Save your changes.

Note: The instructions in the linked file are Claude’s work, not mine. They came out of months of conversation, where Claude would analyze my style notes, and the file evolved from there. They read a little strangely because of that process. If I’d written them from scratch, they’d sound different. But looking at the file you can see what Claude responds to and how it works.

Claude will apply these instructions to every new conversation going forward. Existing conversations won’t pick up the change, so start a fresh chat to test it. If and when Claude struggles to apply the skill, call it out specifically in the prompt, such as, “Revise this for length using the good writing skill.”

The skill specifies constraints in a few categories and the instructions are plain text. As you go, you can also ask Claude to analyze previous conversations for suggested additions to the skill, which Claude will produce and implement within the chat. Each rule operates independently, so removing one doesn’t affect the others.

Claude processes custom instructions at the start of every conversation, before it generates any output. The instructions function as constraints on the model’s default behavior. The model doesn’t always follow every instruction perfectly and the results vary by task. You will still need to edit.

Fri, 06 Mar 2026 00:19:00 -0500

WaPo on the many issues of LLM house writing styles. I have much to add. Here are some notes on applying a writing skill to override house style on Claude.

Thu, 05 Mar 2026 20:24:59 -0500

A thorough look at the loss of institutional hip-hop media archives and what it means for culture writing today.

Mon, 23 Feb 2026 15:33:06 -0500

“A brief history on writing, a forgotten technology: how the challenges we face in today’s digital age can be traced back to one of the most significant yet underrated innovations of all time.”

Sat, 21 Feb 2026 17:34:00 -0500

My life is work right now, so I’ve been training my reading and writing habits in that direction in the hope it will be additive. So when a friend who works in tech suggested I pick up some Ellen Ullman, I snapped it up. Ullman was a programmer who wrote about her experience as a woman in tech in the 1990s, a diligent personal accounting of the early days of Silicon Valley that foreshadows so much of what people are worried about today. Through her first person account of life as a programmer, she consistently reminds the reader that computers are made of boxes and wires, with choices made by mortals (often imbued with dreams of immortality) written on chips and tape, and are limited to only know what we tell them. The Y2K essay was an especially welcome reminder in the era of “singularity” — we’ve been here before.

Here’s a taste.

Wed, 18 Feb 2026 03:07:00 -0500

There are many hyperbolic essays on AI going viral this week. This essay gets into some of the emerging politics around AI in the United States and how they map onto electoral politics, and is irritated with the American left’s approach to AI.

I agree on one angle, that as a cohort, abstaining entirely from new tech is a bad approach.

Haraway (obvs) suggests we stick with the trouble, that sometimes our very presence in the room is what’s required to trouble existing narratives, and that it’s important that share what we learn back to our people at home, whatever that means in our context.

For me: I spend a lot of time at work translating technical ideas and projects in an institutional voice, but on nights and weekends, I’m explaining the ins and outs of the internet to my working class friends and family. Increasingly, I’m asked to explain LLMs and AI and how it relates to their needs around business, the news, entertainment, and as a legal aid.

The “cyborg’s mark” is a metaphor for writing, our duty to translate, and the inevitability of translation through experience. Perhaps staying with the trouble allows us to articulate our experiences in and around the science in ways that both advance our interests and that keep our communities safer. For those of us who straddle multiple worlds, translation is a responsibility.

Fri, 13 Feb 2026 23:18:00 -0500

I’ve been writing about how writing and code are the same thing in digital environments, and about how that equivalence shaped the early web. AI changes that relationship.

The dominant conversation is about whether LLMs can write well, but I suspect that’s the wrong frame. Human storytelling will probably always be more interesting than generated storytelling, because humans love quirks and novelty that can’t be produced artificially.

The more consequential change is that AI-generated text doesn’t just sit on the web waiting to be read, and instead feeds back into the system that produced it. It becomes training data, source material, and eventually, architecture. Remember: When an LLM generates text, it’s producing word sequences based on statistical patterns. The output is one plausible version to your prompt, not a definitive one — but it gets indexed, linked, and cited like any other writing. Nothing about its surface tells you it doesn’t carry the same authority.

Researchers call what follows “model collapse,” a feedback loop where models trained on AI-generated content lose touch with the range of human-produced data. The rare and specific details disappear first, then the middle narrows. Eventually what’s left is smooth, confident, increasingly generic text that sounds authoritative whether it’s accurate or not, which becomes the training data for the next round.

I’m thinking about it in terms of the shift from SEO to GEO. SEO preserved a connection between writing and human judgment. Someone wrote content, search engines indexed it, readers got a list of links and decided which to trust by comparing to their own experience and knowledge. This system was gameable through various sleights of hand, but it assumed a reader with agency. The creator’s job was to be easy to find and worth finding. Streaming video complicated this process but still worked with the same basic ideas. Meanwhile, GEO operates on a different premise. The goal isn’t to get found by a person, but to be found by an algorithm assembling a response the user may or may not independently verify.

(Sad news: today, only about 8% of LLM users verify their output against source material.)

(This does not bode well.)

Consider what happens to the same piece of writing in each system. In the SEO world, your article gets indexed, shows up in search results, someone clicks through, reads it, evaluates whether you or your institution is credible on the topic, maybe skeets it or sends it to a colleague. A human encountered your work, weighed it and decided it was useful, the algo responds and indexes accordingly.

In GEO, an AI system parses that same article, extracts the most clearly structured claims, and drops them into a synthesized answer alongside fragments from other sources the user never sees individually. The reader gets a confident, blended paragraph.

In the old way, the reader moved through the web. AI yanks that experience into a single response from a single interface. We don’t fully understand how AI systems decide what to cite, which makes this power shift feel especially risky. Worse, different people will get different responses from LLMs, even using the same prompts and source materials. We don’t know why.

Fewer entry points to the web means fewer opportunities for diverse or unexpected sources to gain traction, which means the training data gets narrower, which means the outputs get more generic, which means the architecture narrows further, which means fewer perspectives represented in the output. For the reader, it accelerates context collapse in much the same way. Fewer inputs means fewer opportunities to stress test your ideas against new information.

So, what to do?

If generative AI grows as predicted, SEO and GEO will coexist for awhile, and working developers and communicators will need to understand both and how they layer. Strong SEO foundations give you a great head start in AI visibility too, so the fundamentals of good writing and web taxonomy still matter a lot.

But the production of knowledge, the keeping of data, and how it’s all indexed are subjects that are about to become very important, and very political. So I suspect that any fields that touch those topics will also become very important, and very political, very soon.

Fri, 13 Feb 2026 13:38:00 -0500

When I started building websites in the late ’90s, the line between writing and coding didn’t really exist. A person probably learned HTML because she had something to say and needed a place to put it. The internet was free and anonymous and it felt audacious to put your stuff online, like flinging a message in a bottle out to sea. The code was a container for the ideas that rendered them onscreen, and every post and page you published was both a piece of your thinking and a brick in something larger.

People forget that the early web was a writing community. Writers, or bloggers, built their own sites, maintained their own archives, linked to each other deliberately. A blogroll was both a reading list and a show of solidarity, a trackback was a way of saying, “I see you, I’m thinking with you.” The technical architecture - RSS feeds, permalinks, comment threads - existed to organize the writing and the writers’ thoughts, and to push their ideas forward on the open web.

This worked for a time. Communities of writers, most of them without institutional backing or media credentials, built new bodies of knowledge together through interacting as readers and writers, communicating across a foundation of code. The work didn’t stay online. It spilled into conference halls and state houses and newsrooms and policy discussions. As the body of communication built, it created something that accumulated over time. These people influenced mainstream journalism, shaped public conversations, launched careers and movements. In many ways, the national political conditions we face today are a reaction to that movement, and how it allowed regular people to influence the world through the democratization of mass communication.

Midway through the aughts, the brick and mortar publishers and venture capitalists started looking across the landscape, at all the writers creating fantastic content, largely for free, and sucked them into their content and editorial teams. Google Reader lost institutional and financial support as writers moved off the open web and onto publishing platforms, often backed by VC money, that measured the quality of your work by engagement. The addition of algorithmic feeds further broke down this structure – the algorithm doesn’t measure whether your work contributed to shared understanding, but whether it generated a click, a share. The code changed, and the writing changed with it.

The writers changed with it, too. The blogger became the influencer. Bloggers operated in a gift economy of ideas: you wrote to think, to argue, to contribute, and your standing in the wider community came from the quality of your work and contributions over time. Was it a meritocracy? No, but the conditions made it possible for a regular person to talk with experts as peers, which upended traditional power structures around authority and expertise (in both directions, good and bad). Meanwhile, influencers operate in a heavily capitalized attention economy where engagement converts to dollars. The audience is a market to press for money.

The gendered dimension of this shift matters as well. The early blogosphere was full of women writing sharp, rigorous work about politics, culture, parenthood, identity, and technology — work that was explicitly feminist and anti-racist and genuinely moved public conversations. This was the community I helped build (Feministe.us was my project, a community platform of writers and commenters whose coverage and discussion broadly fell under, but was certainly not limited to, the topic of feminism). When the monetized platforms absorbed that energy, the commercial model recast women’s online authority almost entirely in terms of consumer influence. What could we sell? And to whom? The framing around our work went from “this person has important ideas” to “this person can sell things to a niche market.” Meanwhile, men who’d built audiences through tech or political blogging were more likely to be absorbed into mainstream media as columnists and analysts, roles that kept their intellectual authority intact. The influencer label, with all its connotations of superficiality, landed disproportionately on women, and it stuck.

There’s a class piece here, too. The platform model offered something the early blogosphere mostly didn’t — a way to get paid. For women who’d been doing enormous amounts of unpaid intellectual labor building online communities, the question of monetization wasn’t shallow. The implications of information centralization and monetization were as present then as they are now with LLMs and AI. Some people figured out the social platforms and worked their way into viable digital careers. Platforms offered a lot of perks, but all of the perks had a backstop. Corporate interests introduced the problems of advertising, audience and sponsorship, which meant reorienting your individual practice around maximizing your commercial value over and above your intellectual contribution and community management skills. It often meant giving away some or all of your IP rights.

For most people, new system didn’t offer a viable way to get from “respected independent writer” to “respected, protected and compensated writer.” Many of us found ourselves in positions too precarious to take the leap into freelancing and social media, and some, like me, got regular jobs doing regular stuff. Some married money. And in the meantime, some folks figured out how to get into real journalism, which looks much different in 2026.

Great storytelling helps people understand themselves and their world. We let some of that depth go on the Internet with the onslaught of digital marketing and all of its implications, and today the internet feels less useful and less trustworthy than it once did.

It feels like there’s something to take forward from the experience.

Wed, 11 Feb 2026 22:34:57 -0500

Writing is code, code is writing.

Tue, 10 Feb 2026 02:26:00 -0500

I asked Claude.ai for a plain language summary of this buzzy new research paper. Claude offers the following:

Researchers from Caltech and Stanford conducted the first comprehensive survey of how and why large language models (LLMs) — AI systems like ChatGPT or Claude — fail at reasoning tasks. Rather than focusing on what AI can do well, they cataloged and organized the ways it goes wrong.
Why it matters
LLMs are increasingly used in high-stakes settings, but their reasoning failures are often unpredictable and poorly understood. The researchers argue that systematically studying failures — like accident investigations in aviation — is essential for building more reliable AI.

The researchers created a framework with two dimensions:
• Type of reasoning: informal (intuitive, social), formal (logic, math), and embodied (physical, spatial)
• Type of failure: fundamental flaws built into the architecture; domain-specific weaknesses; and robustness problems (inconsistent performance when small details change)

Informal/intuitive reasoning
LLMs exhibit human-like cognitive biases — confirmation bias, anchoring, framing effects — but without human ability to recognize and correct for them. They also struggle with “theory of mind” (understanding what others believe or intend), and with applying consistent moral or ethical reasoning.

Formal/logical reasoning
LLMs often can’t reverse simple logical relationships (if they know “A is B,” they may not infer “B is A”). They struggle to chain multiple reasoning steps together. Basic counting and arithmetic fail in ways that seem surprising given their other capabilities.

Embodied/physical reasoning
LLMs have poor intuitions about the physical world — gravity, spatial relationships, object properties — because they’ve learned only from text, not from physical experience. This extends to visual AI systems as well.

Many failures trace back to how LLMs are trained: they predict the next word in a sequence rather than reasoning deliberately. This makes them good at pattern-matching but unreliable when tasks require genuine logical inference, especially under slight variations in how a question is phrased.

Researchers have proposed fixes including better training data, techniques that force step-by-step reasoning (like “chain-of-thought” prompting), connecting LLMs to external tools like calculators or physics simulators, and architectural changes. However, no single fix is comprehensive — many improvements in one area don’t transfer to others.

Mon, 09 Feb 2026 09:42:27 -0500

A survey of 1200 authors on how they are thinking about and using AI

Sun, 08 Feb 2026 17:19:00 -0500

My undergrad experience in college really shaped my approach to the internet. I was an English Education major at the time, in the early 00s, when the internet was around but mostly the wheelhouse of scholars and nerds. I was a nerd, learning code as a vehicle for writing, primarily to amuse myself and my friends.

The English department was an embattled unit within a school within a college of a STEM-centric university whose administration was perennially annoyed by the Humanities and their writing requirements. One of the English department’s survival tactics was to grow their approach to technical writing, getting deep into the question of how technology changes, shapes and shifts reading, writing and literacy. Thus they organized loosely around an emerging field called “digital rhetoric.”

For a time this was the top rhetoric and composition program in the field, populated by scholars from scrappy programs. My closest mentor, an English PhD from Wayne State in Detroit, studied race and gender representation in video games and how programmers (particularly Black and trans programmers) write themselves into existence through code, design and other aesthetic and storytelling choices. Outsiders had a really hard time understanding how this work belonged in an English department, but ultimately, she was focused on the question of authorship and how the author is projected throughout her work, a classic literary debate. She treated video games as texts and gamers as an audience, an approach that foretold many things about our current political era.

In this space, “digital” doesn’t just mean content on a screen. The concept is more complex, including social, cultural and rhetorical dimensions, in addition to shifts through time. Digital “texts” and practices exist on a continuum with print and other media, rather than in isolation, transforming how persuasion and communication work, both separately and together.

I took all these lessons and ran with them. This is where my approach to the internet is situated, and there are a few truisms that I learned from that time and era that further position my writing and approach.

Writing is code, code is writing

Writing and code are fundamentally the same thing in digital contexts. Both are systems of symbols that create meaning and action through semantic rules. The line between “content” and “container” blurs in digital spaces. A blog post is the copy on the page – and it’s also the metadata, the responsive design that adapts to different screens, the accessibility markup that makes it readable by screen readers. Each of these elements is written (coded) and each carries rhetorical weight and communicates something to the audience, intended or not. If you understand these relationships, you understand how the internet works as a social and information system.

This convergence of digital and material amplifies the concept of intertextuality, the idea that all texts reference, respond to and build upon other texts. In the classroom, intertextuality often focuses on plays and novels, and explores how authors speak and refer to one another’s work over time. In music, this is the study of sampling and referencing and why.

In digital environments, intertextuality becomes literal and functional. Code libraries reference other code libraries. Websites link to and embed other websites. APIs allow different platforms to communicate and share data. A single digital text might pull content from multiple sources simultaneously – a Twitter embed, a YouTube video, a Google Map – creating a networked document that exists across multiple platforms and authors. Virality builds rhetorical velocity through layers of meaning being added by individual users in real time, creating new texts and contexts through iteration and sharing.

Writing makes reality

A lot of students of this era took up knitting. It was trendy, yes, but the professors also taught knitting as an applied example of technical writing, and how writing produces a material reality.

Knitting patterns are technical writing in its purest form. A pattern is a set of instructions that must be precise, unambiguous, and reproducible, the same goals as any technical document. Pattern writers use specialized notation (K2tog, SSK, yo) that functions like code, compressing complex physical actions into standardized symbols that individuals interpret using sticks and string. The pattern must account for different skill levels, anticipate common errors, and provide enough context for the knitter to understand not just what to do, but why.

Good instructions and an able translator may result in a wearable delight: a sweater, a scarf, a cozy and colorful pair of socks. When a pattern fails the result is the same as failed technical documentation: confusion, wasted time and an unusable product. Piles of string. Dumb, useless sticks. It is an incredibly strong reminder that technical writing isn’t confined to manuals and protocols. It exists anywhere complex processes need to be communicated clearly and consistently so others can replicate results – including in your granny’s yarn basket.

So that’s how I learned to knit. Digital rhetors link physical practices to digital ones to illustrate highly conceptual ideas about writing and social networks. And one reason why digital spaces like Ravelry deserve recognition as thoughtful, functional social platforms is that this link between conceptual and material is made explicit in the digital knitting community. Designed for information sharing among a particular audience, decisions about information architecture and community management reasonably cascade from the mission, so Ravelry has remained a reasonably healthy community experience for most users despite its massive size and sprawling discussion. It remains an example of positive social dynamics online, unlike its behemoth competitors.

Always returning to Haraway

Many thinkers and texts built out this field of thought, but Cyborg Manifesto sits at the forefront for me. Writing during the Reagan era, with the populace freaking out about the rise of biotechnology and personal computing all around her, Haraway entered debates about whether women should enter male-dominated, militaristic fields like engineering and computer science, bringing an overtly feminist lens to questions of technology and power.

One major takeaway from Haraway’s work is the importance of rejecting binary thinking around technology and science. This approach aligns with other humanist and feminist perspectives that foundationally believe technology is by, about, and for the human experience, thus providing new and novel sites for political struggle. This gave people frustrated by tech a permission structure for interacting with technology rather than avoiding or abstaining from it entirely.

If these questions of knowledge and power remain central to technology, we want the people making those decisions to share our values and interests, and to be in the room when decisions are made. This argument is ripe for various challenges, which is why it was such a provocative starting point for cyberpunks and cyberfeminists alike.

Sharing is caring

This was an open source culture that meant sharing not just finished products, but the breadcrumbs and other attempts at learning along the way. It requires the safety that supports a yes/and culture, where people can collaborate with transparency, in spite of, or in consideration of, the ugly stuff and the many unknowns.

We let public and private live alongside each other without rigid boundaries about professionalism and polish. Your serious professional work could sit next to a meme, which could sit next to a picture of your cat, and none of it diminished the other.

This was an intentional acknowledgment that people are multifaceted, and that the digital spaces we inhabit should reflect that complexity. Putting the personal and the real alongside the artificiality of digital communications builds a relationship between the viewer and creator in ways that carefully curated, brand-managed presences just can’t (also: yawn).

Vulnerability, humor, expertise, horror, scholarship, and joy coexist, as in real life.

Sun, 08 Feb 2026 14:58:00 -0500

I have a confession. While experimenting with AI over the last year, I wondered what would happen if I crammed an unfinished novel draft, one I actually care about, into Claude. Claude is pitched as the LLM for writers, with Claude 3.7 Sonnet and 3 Opus widely regarded as the premier LLMs for writers, including creative writing, long-form content and human-like prose. Meanwhile, I majored in English and work in mass communications, so I’m trained to think about writing creatively, strategically and tactically. Writing and personal expression have been part of my daily life for most of my life. If this tool could in fact produce a quality story, someone like me should be able to make it happen. Instead, the experience left me confident that AI isn’t a good vehicle for creative, narrative writing.

Here’s what I found:

On the technical side, Claude struggled to maintain a narrative thread over time. The longer the chat, the more the bot drifted and eventually lost track of details and claims made about characters earlier in the plotline. It’s not a sustainable approach for narrative writers because continuity matters: outsource too much plotline to the bot and your characters lose relationship to one another.

LLMs like Claude work fine for writing support—they can function something like a synonym machine, helping writers work through technical questions of redundancy, register, length, and other semantic needs while drafting. But when you outsource world-building and meaning-making to an LLM, it becomes narratively confusing fast. Despite giving Claude extensive background on my primary characters and the world they live in, it would confidently declare that a character’s relationship to another was X, then claim the opposite on the next page. Dialogue was thin and expository. It preferred a sort of “maid and butler” style of dialogue where two characters artificially recap shared knowledge for the reader. Meanwhile Claude does not do feelings well, which is arguably the point of much narrative writing.

Ultimately my drafts were worse off than what I started with – less organized, more confusing, with so much narrative drift that almost nothing was usable, even as a first draft. A devil’s advocate might argue that my prompting wasn’t sophisticated enough to produce the results I wanted. Sure.

But then we have the second problem: Claude’s approach to storytelling isn’t narratively interesting. Fiction and narrative writers put tremendous energy into world-building and sensory experiences. The goal is to immerse the reader in a sensory experience so total that they can experience another world entirely – the original VR, if you will. A great writer even exploits your higher-level cognitive functions by reusing parts of the brain that evolved for action and perception, which is why a good story makes you think, feel, and wonder.

Claude does not feel or wonder. Claude collates.

A key part of this essay suggests that LLMs create meaning through triangulation – that by pinging other ideas and vocabulary, an LLM can get a human reader close, or close enough, to suffice in many cases of writing. In my experience, this is true enough in business writing, where tinkering with approach and register can become as important as precise verbiage.

But this misses the pleasure and the point of good storytelling, which is myriad but usually centers on the satisfaction of expanding your imagination and experience through narrative, by seeing your own messy, striving, failing, hopeful, and collective human experience reflected in another person’s expression. That kind of meaning-making doesn’t happen through triangulation. It happens through the labor of human thought, experience and skilled articulation. That’s art, babes.

This article gets into the mess of AI and creative writing, within the domain of the romance genre, which famously cranks out variations on romance themes at a rapid clip. It drills down into some of the debates about writing, authority and authorship in relationship to LLMs that are playing out across the publishing sector now. Remember: early research suggests that most writers who use LLMs as part of their workflow ultimately retain their sense of authorship in and around the tools, suggesting that even when writers adopt AI assistance, they still see themselves, not the tool, as the creative and accountable source. So based in my experience above, I suspect that if an AI approach to creative writing is successful, it’s because the author is linking her approach to emerging tech, not because the work is good, and that’s a difference worth distinction.

Sun, 08 Feb 2026 13:43:00 -0500

Something else I noticed in my experimentation with AI and creative writing: Claude prefers a mid-length, declarative sentence, while I prefer a lot of variety in my prose. Sentence variety is a primary consideration in any text-based communication approach. Write accordingly.

Thu, 05 Feb 2026 12:12:00 -0500

🍿Watched: Toni Morrison: The Pieces I Am

This PBS doc recently came to Netflix, and I tucked in expecting a nice but predictably boring documentary about one of my favorite authors. To the contrary, it really plumbs Morrison’s writing craft, not only as an author but as an editor who brought a generation of incredible thinkers into the limelight. She talks in depth about her writing process, her approach to authorship and editing, and how she kept these roles separate at the peak of her midcentury literary career in NYC’s publishing industry.

There’s something so powerful about hearing her discuss the craft, her deliberate choices, the refusal to center whiteness, and the insistence that Black readers were her intended audience. She saw her critics and wrote around their critiques with authority and confidence. This was a breath of fresh air since I’m so immersed in the AI era, which threatens to change our perceptions around value of writing, the choices and experiences behind the author, and how we consider the influence and responsibility of authorship.

Mon, 02 Feb 2026 09:49:38 -0500

“Evidence from a study about workplace writers who use AI suggests that writers are outsourcing some of their research, editing, or drafting to AI, but that they retain responsibility for their writing.”

Crunching for clarity

Fri, 30 Jan 2026 12:12:00 -0500

In 1999, academic and theorist Judith Butler famously won an award for the worst academic sentence, raising good questions about how we read difficult texts, who gets to access academic ideas, and the role of academic and plain language in and around the academy:

The move from a structuralist account in which capital is understood to structure social relations in relatively homologous ways to a view of hegemony in which power relations are subject to repetition, convergence, and rearticulation brought the question of temporality into the thinking of structure, and marked a shift from a form of Althusserian theory that takes structural totalities as theoretical objects to one in which the insights into the contingent possibility of structure inaugurate a renewed conception of hegemony as bound up with the contingent sites and strategies of the rearticulation of power.

This was my era in college, and I remember feeling challenged and overwhelmed as an undergrad trying to read theory for the first time. So today, I asked Claude.ai to put it in plain language, just to see what would happen. Here’s the after:

Scholars used to think that capitalism shaped society in consistent, predictable patterns. But newer thinking focuses on how power works—how it repeats, overlaps, and gets reshaped over time. This brought time into the picture and moved away from older theories that treated social structures as fixed. Instead, recognizing that structures can change opened up a new way of understanding power: it's tied to specific moments and strategies, and it's always being renegotiated.

Thu, 29 Jan 2026 18:05:48 -0500

A lot of readers are fascinated with the “black box” of AI writing, and trying to reverse engineer what it does and why. John Gallagher goes down the rabbit hole and articulates some credible theories about why LLMs use lists and listing to create meaning, and why it matters.

Thu, 22 Jan 2026 14:05:29 -0500

While conspiring with a friend about life and work in these trying times, both of us confessed that we believe, at the root, that reading and writing are ultimately the cure for everything that ails us: collectively, individually, epistemically, existentially. Maybe that’s naive, but I’ll take it.

Sun, 09 Nov 2025 17:07:48 -0500

“Writing is a practical skill—particularly since most of our online communication is text-based to begin with. …Done well, it means you’re contributing signal, instead of noise.”

What is this site and why am I doing it?

Sun, 09 Nov 2025 14:12:00 -0500

In recent history I stopped posting on most social media and moved to the fediverse. I still browse the social platforms to keep up with trends and friends, but I only post on my private IG and here.

What I share here is separate from but related to my professional life — I’m thinking out loud and making room for rough, unfinished ideas. I write mainly for myself, but if others find it useful, that’s great. The practice of reading and reflecting makes your thinking stick, and I am from a certain time and place, so this is how I approach learning and communicating about what I’m learning. It’s a habit.

While this is my preferred approach, I acknowledge that sharing unfinished ideas publicly is risky and you have to accept accountability for the messiness that comes with that. But I also know that working through your vulnerability through the act of writing lets you tap into your most creative, innovative self and test your ideas against an evolving sense of what’s good. The potential for an audience, however real or implied, keeps you more honest and less self-indulgent. Despite the trade offs, I think it’s worthwhile.

As I add to this page, I’ll be thinking out loud about digital rhetoric and communication alongside emerging technology, and linking back to foundational ideas I see reflected online today. Occasionally I’ll say something longer.

Sun, 09 Nov 2025 14:03:11 -0500

More on rhetorical velocity and the art of the remix. As Lawrence Lessig says, “Remix is how we as humans live and everyone within our society engages in this act of creativity.”

Sun, 09 Nov 2025 12:36:11 -0500

Writing for the public in an age of anxiety: “This article identifies five topoi of this new rhetorical landscape—presence, persistence, permeability, promiscuity, and power—describing the anxieties and affordances they present for student writers, the dispositions toward writing they foster, and the challenges and opportunities they pose for composition. This framework provides a critical vocabulary for compositionists seeking to help those who negotiate emerging networked publics.”

Wed, 05 Nov 2025 18:12:04 -0500

Why emphasis on literacy, writing, reading and the canon is always politically prescient. Also why the cyborg’s mark remains one of my favorite metaphors.

Wed, 14 May 2025 12:18:58 -0500

An interesting take on why we like AI for coding but not for writing. www.linkedin.com/pulse/cre…

Fri, 20 Sep 2024 08:05:55 -0500

Finished reading: On Writing by Stephen King 📚

Wed, 12 Jun 2024 10:04:30 -0500

Maybe it’s because I’ve been reading so much, maybe it’s because I’m in a reflective stage of life, but I have the writing bug again. It’s been a long, long time since I felt the urge to write.